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to you as something approaches

something speeding fast down my littered street dont care what it is or what rumbles or soars in its drivers eyes maybe well go to the soldiers palaceretrieve my golden battleaxe take a swing at my...

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Wonderful 'stream of consciousness' approach to your poem. Sounds like you can't leave fast enough.my favorite lines (made me smile):take one last look as your dark cloud covers youstick my thumb...

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makes me think of heart break i like the high volume in your words. You really push the emotion. Like you are in agony after she broke your heart.

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Your words touched my heart! AWESOME!

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